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Last Ones Abroad

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Four friends named Alice, Lauren, Alex, and Eric were in Alice's room packing their bags. They were all going on a cruise.

Setting 1: At Alice's room packing bags.

They all continued to pack. The next morning they all met at Alice's house to prepare to leave.

Setting 2: Grandma's house (Alice's home).

They all put their luggage in the car. They piled into the car one by one. On their way to the car Alex sang, "No packing anymore! No!" repeatedly.

Setting 3: Inside Lauren's scion.

Finally they all arrived at the cruise. Everyone was really excited and happy. Alex stopped singing about not packing. They were getting out of the car, still blabbing about what they were going to do, when Eric noticed something.

Setting 4: At the cruise.

The girls stayed excited and the guys stayed suspicious.

Author's Note: What's so suspicious about "The Woods," you will have to find out next week in another chapter of "Last Ones Abroad". This is our very first comic, I hope you liked it.

 

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