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Author's Note: I am considering making this into a story. Let me know if you want me to! This is a scene, I guess it's sort of a spoiler. I did leave some stuff out. Please let me know by Ymail or BBS if you want me to start up some chapters!

I watched the light slowly leave her eyes. "Don't leave me," she said, quietly, no emotion. "I won't, Brooklyn. I won't. I love you so much. Do you here me? You turned my world into explosions of color when it was only black and white. I love you. I love you. I love you." I repeated. I couldn't stand staying, but I had to - for her. "I love you Wes," she breathed. I held her hand, and her heart monitor was slowing down, fast. Too fast. The sparkle in her eyes were gone, the light was leaving. When I heard the flat line, and I saw the light in her eyes for the last time. I laid my head on her chest, and sobbed. This girl, the love of my life, was gone. I remember her coming to America, helping her move stuff into Kale's apartment. I remember the first time we had a full conversation - a deep one. I remember the first date. First kiss. When I asked her out with that necklace with a heart. My world was colorful, full of light, like her eyes. She turned it into a coloring book. And now the pages were torn out. My life is back to black and white.


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