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Roxy130
Whyville Poet

Thoughtless prayers

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my mother taught me
to pray, when I was
seven years old,
as if god
could crawl from my pockets
every time I whispered
alone.

now, at seventeen, she
preaches the importance
of cameras.
as if each picture
was a memory,
to recall
as if I could not remember
on my own.

my mother called me,
when I didn't
12,000 miles from home.
to remind me
to take photographs.
so I could send them
and exist, for her
on paper.

but instead,
i talked out my window
to the night
and only the cars that passed
could answer me
because I had no pockets
or prayers
and these days
were not worth
the cost of film

 

Editor's Note: This is a very powerful poem!  What inspired you to write it?

 

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