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Let Down

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Everyone's always so quick to compare,
bleeding and hurting; breaking under his stare.
She's trying so hard to make it at the top,
But nothing really works and she blows her last shot.
Her life is so screwed up.

Seeing her face is like looking in a mirror,
Screaming aloud but nobody . . . can . . . hear . . . her cry.
Nothing is worse than being a disappointment,
she hears the twisted laughter but doesn't see the enjoyment.

Drowning in the ocean is more painless than this,
after all ignorance is bliss.
One more time, kick her again
They see the effect, but they all just want to win.

She didn't know what she was getting involved in,
if only the tables would magically spin.
I know what it's like I see through her mask,
She's attempting a suddenly impossible task.

A never-ending battle she's tired of fighting,
her words are in blood and she's tired of writing.
No recovery; she'll never be the same.
Congratulations you've won your own game.
Her life is so screwed up.

 

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